Nearly every new fiction writer has a writing hook, something about the way they tell this story that will draw the reader in. In this blog, instead of focusing on plot or characters, let’s examine the way the words unravel to the reader. Some of these writing styles are creatively designed and were part of the original conception of the manuscript. The author believes the world is going to be agog when they read their work.
And then, the author reads about common writing mistakes and finds their wonderfully conceived idea on the list. Perhaps it’s the use of multiple first-person point-of-views, a non-linear narrative, a prologue/epilogue, and the list goes on. The gut reaction is that your story is different, your style doesn’t need to adhere to these rules. Who are these so-called experts to tell you about rules? You are an artist.
The sad truth is, if you’re starting off, you should follow the rules. This may mean a rewrite, unfortunately, and (what you first perceive as) a dimming of the initial story’s spark. For the sake of your story, you should at least give following writing guidelines consideration. Spend some time with the advice, write a few chapters without your gimmick. See what unfolds.
But why? If you are learning the craft, you must become proficient in it before taking on an unconventional style. The rules aren’t there to limit you; they exist to guide you. An agent or publisher is interested in your style, especially if you use the rules to better your plot, characters, or themes. Your writing style is the selling point. Too often, an unconventional choice will distract your agent, publisher, or reader and leave them rejecting your work.
“But,” you say, “I know of many stories with these ‘writing mistakes,’ and they are successful.” True, but do you think this was the author’s first attempt? I’ll admit in rare cases, they work. Stuart Turton’s Evelyn Hardcastle comes to mind. However, most authors have a series of published credentials before they try a writing maneuver that flaunts the rules. For example, both authors of This is How you Lose the Time War, an epistolary novel, have many novels to their credit. The novel’s unique style wasn’t their first rodeo.
If the story cannot be written in a conventional way, then go for it. It’s always better to write the story than not. But, be conscientious that you’re at a disadvantage from the start. Make the decision purposefully, not as a reaction.
After you gain experience and skill, play with the rules if you want. A novel that flaunts the rules is usually a delightful read.